The drop has very much potential!
I have some things to say about this song
Positives of this song overall:
drop is very nice and strong, like the sounds
The song has a progression which leads the listener throughotu the song in a nice way
Constructive ideas:
maybe work with smoothing some of ur intro sounds as they seem very sharp to the ear at times. Also try to "clean" up your sounds to give a more obvious transition between breaks and drops.
I like where this is going.
I 5'd
Helth