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Helth

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I agree with him bellow in these thigns

Seriosly, I respect that you wrote a song in 5/4. It's pretty amazing. It pretty much has a really forced tense feeling to the beat, like your keeping up with something (the 5/4 beat haha)
But really it lends a cool air to the song. Let me just say though that the violin solo sounds just the slightest bit OFF in a way(in timing), and at some point you have this electric guitar baseline that distorts downwards... Actually I found it again it's right at the end. It's really out of sync with the rest of the music. Oops okay the real one I was thinking about is at 0:30 too. So yea just those two things and there's not many ways you can make this song better after that.
5/5 cuz I loved it

haha, but yeah, its really nice u can write songs in 5/4, that must be freakin hard dude :O

keep up teh amazing job :D

5d too

Helth

Woah that was happy

and strange.. XD, or the intro was.. i liked when the drums kicked in, and that really weird flute came in haha.. really happy song, could fit awesomely to a teletubbiegame! :D

keep up the childmusic haha

Helth
5/5

U made me smile >:D

Keep it up

FairSquare responds:

Haha, a teletubbiegame xD
I'm glad i could make you smile, thanks for the review :-)

Nice man

It's good trance, but the intro.. there are alot of things happening, so i can't really hear all of it :P, but if u wanted that, then it's good haha.

The lead is nice, but then again when the bass came in at 0:41 the lead drowned in the rest :S fix it, dunno how .. 0:59 really nice, how long will this turn out to be? 7 min or something? caus then u got a nice progressive trance intro :D

Keep up the awesome stuff ^^,

Helth
5/5

(I'm alittle better in trance then house, so i gave u some constructive critism).

Cya on msn :D

Woah nice man ! :D

Man u are getting good in trance too now :D, really reallyawesome, love the piano, very catchy!

I like it very much man, msn.. wanna ask u of something (nothing gay) LOL

Helth
5/5

Favorited AWESOME SONG

zenodio responds:

Wow, thanks a lot! Really, thanks.

And i lol'd when i was reading the "Nothign gay" thingy xD

Ehmm

That pluck in the background is really ankward, and the drums aren't great, i think it needs a bass too!

Helth
4/5

Pezmobile responds:

Well i really don't have much of a selection when it comes to instruments. and it does have bass (crunchy background 1:02) but i probably could have made it better. Thanks for the feedback.

Woah man

Awesome sounds here! Very prof! really, i loved the bass, and the kick was very discoish :D nice man! im gonna favorite this, and keep up the awesome work!

Helth
5/5

Favorited

hopeku responds:

Oh thanks man, this is really appreciated!

By the way, you can ask me for tips anytime!

Hmm

U are working with automation clips now :D, nice step man! keep improving, one day u will be the new paragonx9!

Helth
5/5

photosyntesen responds:

i am the new paragonx9 XD

Ur best song?

Yes it is, and yay industrial :D, if just u had the .flp then i could add some awesome drums and fx's

Get the full version NOW!

cya on msn ;)

Helth
5'd

Keep up the work

photosyntesen responds:

thank you :D

Wow nice

Very chill, it could use some mastering here and there, but overall a nice track :-)

I don't like the lead at for example, 1:58

Helth
5'd

Keep it up

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