Great athomsphere
Seriously u got something here! u just need a little more deepness! the break at 0:44 was a little bit strange, but then it came back to goodness
I would say hmm..
Change the percussion to something more smooth wich FITS to the song! this is more housy/trancy kinda.. make a slow nice rythm that really fits the song.
The mastering was the best i've seen from you so far, if u just had the .flp man.. u could make this to a masterpiece! u gotta get XXL soon :D
Lovely man, incredible! best i've heard from you so far, not kidding.
Helth
5/5
Keep up the great job man, you will be very good soon man ;)