Lol.. i don't know
Good athmosphere...
but nothing happens in the song, one thing i lold about is the effect at 0:52 hahahaha, it was way to loud man :)
If u made more melodies etc, it would be a 10..
can't give it more sry, i think u made something really amazing in the start, then you kinda died in the rest of the song.
One thing i really like is the background pad, and a thing i dislike is the beat...
and the fx's
otherwise good job man!
Helth
5/5
Keep it up - also...
next time use some more reverb and delay - it will make betetr athmosphere